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| Ausgewählte Antwort von: David Hollywood Local time: 12:05 | ||||||
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4 +2 | you lean on the wall |
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3 +1 | As you're leaning against the wall... |
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As you're leaning against the wall... Erklärung: As you're leaning against the wall, rolling a cigarette, I'm stepping right up to you. If the purpose is to draw readers in and get their attention, I would consider using progressive tense. Compare with passage below: "It’s approaching 3PM. You’re leaning against the wall outside the meeting room, bracing yourself for the sheer boredom and monotony of the coming hour. Sigh. Each week, you sit down with your manager and, regrettably, you slowly plod through a status update for each of your projects while she makes notes on her laptop..." http://theengineeringmanager.com/growth/keeping-your-1-to-1s... |
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7 Stunden Antwortsicherheit: Zustimmung (Netto): +2
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