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Angebot oder Dienst

Englisch translation: for using the ***offers*** or services concerned for which you have registered

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Deutsch Begriff oder Satz:zum Zwecke der Nutzung des jeweiligen ***Angebotes*** oder Dienstes, für den Sie sich registriert haben
Englisch Übersetzung:for using the ***offers*** or services concerned for which you have registered
Eingetragen von: Sebastian Witte

20:01 Apr 30, 2019
Übersetzungen Deutsch > Englisch [PRO]
Law/Patents - Internet, E-Commerce
Deutsch Begriff oder Satz: Angebot oder Dienst
Dear all,

Translating a data privacy statement on a company website into UK English.

I am aware that quite a few translated company websites use "offer" for Angebot in this context. However, some of them are from the German-speaking countries and I am looking for something more adequate, stylistically.

You know, I usually use services for Angebote in this website context, tend to be happy with that choice, but then, it is not an option here because Dienste are just that.

DE:
Sie können sich auf unserer Website registrieren, um zusätzliche Funktionen auf der Seite zu nutzen.
Die dazu eingegebenen Daten verwenden wir nur zum Zwecke der Nutzung des jeweiligen ***Angebotes*** oder Dienstes, für den Sie sich registriert haben.

I am not sure but judging by the context and from experience I think both terms might refer to website-related matters rather than what the company sells in the real world. The actual source text as a whole has not enabled me to make a clear assessment.

Cheers,

Sebastian Witte
Sebastian Witte
Deutschland
Local time: 19:44
offered product or service
Erklärung:
This would be my preference in this context. Angebot can refer to both a product and a service, which are offered via the Internet.

Actually I would probably change this to "offered products and services", even though the source is singular.
Ausgewählte Antwort von:

Alexander Schleber (X)
Belgien
Local time: 19:44
Grading comment
Thank you everybody, in particular Johanna for finding that all-important link. In the end we used her version.
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Zusammenfassung aller eingereichten Antworten
4 +3offered product or service
Alexander Schleber (X)
4(website) option (banking: facility) offered or service
Adrian MM.


Diskussionseinträge: 8





  

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2 Stunden   Antwortsicherheit: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
(website) option (banking: facility) offered or service


Erklärung:
The answer may lie in the asker's own formulation of the question: '.... it is not an *option* here because Dienste are just that.'

Though a 'joker-word', Angebot (or spelt Anbot, often meaning a quotation in AT/CH German) doesn't seem to work well as an assortment or range here.



Beispielsätze:
  • As a member, we provide you with numerous tools to help you better understand all the trading options on offer

    Quelle: http://clutch.co/web-designers/resources/options-for-buildin...
Adrian MM.
Österreich
Erfüllt Kriterien
Muttersprache: Englisch
Hinweise an den Beantworter der Frage
Fragesteller: Thank you.

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11 Stunden   Antwortsicherheit: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 Zustimmung (Netto): +3
offered product or service


Erklärung:
This would be my preference in this context. Angebot can refer to both a product and a service, which are offered via the Internet.

Actually I would probably change this to "offered products and services", even though the source is singular.

Alexander Schleber (X)
Belgien
Local time: 19:44
Erfüllt Kriterien
Spezialgebiet
Muttersprache: Deutsch, Englisch
PRO-Punkte in Kategorie: 17
Grading comment
Thank you everybody, in particular Johanna for finding that all-important link. In the end we used her version.

Kommentare zu dieser Antwort (und Antworten vom Beantworter der Frage)
Zustimmung  philgoddard: I think "offered" is redundant.
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Zustimmung  Steffen Walter
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Zustimmung  Esther Pugh: Yes to plural, Alexander!
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